martes, 3 de marzo de 2009


Redacción de ingles: An imaginary animal.


Hi!! I am Lucía, and I go to tell which is my perfect animal:

It is an animal with the form of a dolphin, delicate and nice simultaneusly, because the dolphins are a most pretty animal in the world; with the rapidity of a shark, because a shark is one of the animals most fast in this planet; and with the quality of a penguin: can live in a water and in the land, because the penguins have a privilege of having this quality.

In resum my perfect animal is pretty, fast and favoured, very favoured...

And it animal has the followin name: DOLPHPENSH.


LuCiiA...

1 comentario:

  1. YOUR MISTAKES:

    * I am going to tell you...
    * dolphins are the prettiest animals...
    * sharks are the fastest animals...
    * they can live in water and in land
    * Never use "the" when talking about something in general
    * and this animal has the following name:...

    YOUR MARK: GOOD +

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